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Wednesday, August 21, 2019
paragraph in nogos group
we had to make a paragraph with a bunch of random words this is how mine turned out
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Hello Luke.
ReplyDeleteI like the detail in the paragraph. Next time try too add more capitals
Hey Luke-
ReplyDeleteMaybe put a capital at the start of a sentence,and make sure the sentence makes sense otherwise people will get confused. Make sure your story is interesting or people will fall asleep. Keep up the good work.